Feedback Idea 1

Post Feedback Ideas:

 Idea 1 – Remembering Myself – Having pitched my first idea I received feedback from some of my class -mates informing me of helpful suggestions and constructive criticism.

What went well: I found that people liked my song choice mainly because it stands out and is different making it more interesting for an audience. I also found that my idea of having paint throw around was liked by most people, as it helps add another visual image to look at. The contrast between the softness and simplicity of the ballet dancer with the pain also works well. Lastly people liked the simplicity of my idea as some times keeping it basic is better then over doing it making things look rushed and less professional.

 

What needs to be improved/thought about in more detail?

It was suggested I add one more element to the video as I currently only have two main parts which could result in the audience getting bored with the repetition then switching off during my video which is what I want to avoid.  I also realised that filming with mirrors might not work as well as I had hoped as it will be extremely difficult to keep the camera crew out of the shot with all the reflections from the mirror. Lastly a man sings the song and currently I have pastel paint powder being thrown on him so I might need to rethink this as it could come across as girly. Overall I need to come up with an extra something to make my video more enticing and interesting.